My name is Mikey. I am a member of the Summer Learning Journey team and I will be commenting on some of your blog posts over the next few weeks. It looks like you've made a great start and I'm excited to read what you've written so far.
First off, you've done an amazing job displaying each of the activities. I can tell you've put a lot of effort into each post so well done.
You've used wonderful language in your opinion piece on Tāne Mahuta which really helps me see your point of view. Thank you for including some facts about Tāne Mahuta as well - knowing more about it has made me want to see it too! Are there any other places in New Zealand you'd be interested in visiting?
Well done on researching your three New Zealand sports teams, and writing a description on each. I'm torn between the Silver Ferns and the White Ferns uniforms as my favourite but I can see why you've chosen the White Ferns. Do you play any of these sports yourself? Or any other sports you haven't mentioned here?
Great work with activity 3 as well. I like how you've explained what information you need to know before you can solve the problem. Are you able to talk me through the strategy you've used to come to that answer?
Hi Jaime!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I am a member of the Summer Learning Journey team and I will be commenting on some of your blog posts over the next few weeks. It looks like you've made a great start and I'm excited to read what you've written so far.
First off, you've done an amazing job displaying each of the activities. I can tell you've put a lot of effort into each post so well done.
You've used wonderful language in your opinion piece on Tāne Mahuta which really helps me see your point of view. Thank you for including some facts about Tāne Mahuta as well - knowing more about it has made me want to see it too! Are there any other places in New Zealand you'd be interested in visiting?
Well done on researching your three New Zealand sports teams, and writing a description on each. I'm torn between the Silver Ferns and the White Ferns uniforms as my favourite but I can see why you've chosen the White Ferns. Do you play any of these sports yourself? Or any other sports you haven't mentioned here?
Great work with activity 3 as well. I like how you've explained what information you need to know before you can solve the problem. Are you able to talk me through the strategy you've used to come to that answer?
Fantastic work so far Jaime. Keep it up!
Blog ya later! :)
Oh! And remember to attribute any images you use on your blog to their owner. Here's a link that can help you do that on your future posts:
ReplyDeletehttps://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit#slide=id.p
Happy blogging!