This week we were given the task of writing a paragraph to advertise global sportswear brand Adidas. This is my writing.
Sport, leisure, and recreational activities are progressively becoming much more common in the daily lives of citizens of all ages, including yours. Whether you’re just playing for a rural sport club, training for the Olympics, or simply searching to earn status, Adidas has the best products for you.
Adidas has been a staple in best-selling, worldwide sports and casualwear, for decades. With over 66 years of experience and remarkable global sales, Adidas offers an enormous, immensely high-quality range of sportswear, casual wear, and fitness accessories. Because of all of this, we guarantee our products are sure to have heads turning your way!
Looking for reliable, suitable fitness gear without looking like a gym rat? Adidas promotes that! Searching for a cozy pair of durable running shoes? Adidas offers them! Longing for some trendy clothes and accessories, like Kylie Jenner? Adidas sells every article of clothing you could imagine - and much, much more! Perhaps you aren’t a sports fanatic, and are simply looking for casual clothing and sensational shoes to impress your friends. Well, hurry down to Adidas for this instantly! It has the absolute best, lowest prices, for the highest quality, trendiest and newest gear; compared to all of its competitors! Don’t get left behind! Earn those results you’ve been anticipating. Get your game on with Adidas!
Founded 67 years ago and still going strong. Adidas. One of the most popular sports companies in the world. Shoes, clothes and even more Adidas has it all. Available in every size, you are guaranteed to find your perfect fit for everything. There are aisles full of things incredible things that even David Beckham would wear! You want cheaper prices, we have them! We offer a huge range of products just waiting for you. Shoes, Clothes, and even more, Adidas has it all! Adidas, with all your sport needs.
After writing, we had to mark our use of vocabulary and our range of different sentence structures using a success criteria rubric.
For vocabulary, I gave myself at R6. I believe my writing really described Adidas's products well without confusion. I gave specific, clear, helpful information to really persuade my readers.
For sentence structure, I gave my writing an R6. I believe my information was clear and I used a range of different sentences lengths to hook the reader is, make my writing less boring, and pleasing to read. For my next steps I will work on strengthening my shorter sentences, as they are the sentence type I am least confident of using.
There is my writing! I hope you enjoyed reading it, and you were somewhat persuaded to buy Adidas! I enjoy writing persuasively and believe advertising is an interesting topic to learn and write about. So what do you think? What marks would you give my writing? Feel free to leave feedback down below.
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