While working from home, for English we have been continuing the preparation for our film study.
We've been working on writing SEXXXY paragraphs to explain our ideas and thoughts around the aspects of a small excerpt from a visual text. For example in this Google Slide, we watched a scene from Limitless and then the 2004 short film Kerosene Creek. While watching each video, we were given questions to think about, and then we had to pick an aspect that stood out to us and step-by-step, write a SEXXXY paragraph. (Statement, Evidence, Explanation x 3, Your Link)
I enjoy writing these paragraphs but whenever it comes to linking or comparing to another visual text my mind always goes blank! I got there in the end though :)
This is very well presented Jaime. I like how you introduced your work and embedded the slideshow. The adjectives you use in your paragraphs are unique and evocative and help your personal style and voice come through. You have gone above and beyond. I am really pleased that you engaged with this work during lockdown. Looking forward to more great writing from you :)
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